托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题39:想象未来十年的生活
日期:2014-11-14 09:58

(单词翻译:单击)

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口语题目:

Imagine your life ten years in the future. Talk about one way you think your life will be different in ten years than it is now. Use details to explain your answer.
名师点评:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:24
评分标准:
1、Generalization:论述the difference between the life in 10 years and now 内容充分,且较具有层次感。
2、Delivery:语速均匀,本次表述整体语音语调的表述较为清晰。
3、Language Use:语言句型和词汇运用较为地道,表达方式较为清晰,但有一定的句法错误。
例如:I have several tests to prepare, such as... 缺少介词,可以改为: I have several tests to prepare for, such as...
4、Topic Development:观点论证扩展有细节具体陈述,信息观点表述流畅。

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重点单词
  • scoren. 得分,刻痕,二十,乐谱 vt. 记分,刻划,划线,
  • independentadj. 独立的,自主的,有主见的 n. 独立派人士,无
  • commentn. 注释,评论; 闲话 v. 注释,评论
  • deliveryn. 递送,交付,分娩
  • generalizationn. 一般化,普遍化,概括,泛论