托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题56:去哪座城市读大学?
日期:2014-12-13 09:10

(单词翻译:单击)

学生托福口语录音:如上音频。

口语题目:

Some students prefer to go to universities or colleges in their own cities or towns. Others prefer universities or colleges in new faraway places. Which do you prefer and why?

名师点评:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:25

评分标准:
1、Generalization:论述You think it's better to attend a university or college in a new far away city 的理由充分,且较具有层次感。
2、Delivery:语速均匀,整体语音语调的表述较为清晰。现在语音语调越清晰了,还是我听力越好了呢?
3、Language Use:语言句型和词汇运用较为地道,表达方式较为清晰,但有一定的句法错误。
例如:You may feel a kind lonely 改为: You may feel a kind loneliness [a kind of 后面要加名词]
4、Topic Development:观点论证扩展有细节具体陈述,信息观点表述流畅。

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