托福口语点评批改附MP3 话题57:儿童应该帮忙做家务
日期:2014-12-14 09:22

(单词翻译:单击)

学生托福口语录音:如上音频。

口语题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.

名师点评:
Comment for Independent Task 1 or 2
Overall Score:24

评分标准:
1、Generalization:论述You agree with the satement that children should help with the hose work 的理由充分,且较具有层次感。
2、Delivery:语速均匀,整体语音语调的表述较为清晰,但有部分单词发音不够标准。例如:responsibility 中[bi]发成了[bei],还有awareness中[εə]发音需要纠正。
3、Language Use:语言句型和词汇运用较为地道,表达方式较为清晰。简单句式与单词有重复使用现象,可灵活进行调整。
4、Topic Development:信息观点表述流畅。

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